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全国2009年10月高等教育自学考试英语写作试题及答案
课程代码：00603
I．Supply the missing paragraph(20 points)
The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing．Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words．Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided．
The Breakdown of Communication
It is commonly acknowledged that language problems make communication between people from different cultures difficult．Because of the language barriers，people cannot express their feelings clearly to each other．However, communication problems also exist between individuals from the same culture．Although they have the same cultural background，they sometimes cannot understand each other well．Communication between individuals breaks down because of many factors．The most significant ones include personality, age difference and competition between individuals．
Personality has a great influence on communication between people．First, the sharing of common interests is often essential for initiating communication． If two people hold completely different attitudes，it will not be easy for them to start communicating with each other．Second，the willingness to express their feelings and opinions freely is needed if meaningful communication is to be developed．Some people do not want to talk about controversial subjects, fearing that this will hurt their relationship with friends. Instead, they keep their discussion of topics at a very superficial level，which prevents them from knowing and understanding each other. The lack of understanding leads to unsuccessful communication. It is clear that personality, to some extent，affects the initiation and maintenance of communication.
{The age difference between generations also has a significant influence on communication. People of different generations receive very different education. Since society is advancing at a great pace, it is not surprising that they hold very divided opinions because of the wide gap in age. Disagreement on many topics between people of different generations results in difficulties for effective communication. For example, some parents expect their children to share their views, yet the values that the younger generation holds vary greatly from those accepted by the older generation. Therefore, communication between generations declines because of the lack of understanding. } （答案仅供参考）
【评分参考】
1. 第一部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的回答和参考答案意思相近，或思路新颖，且有创见，即使在整体上不够全面，也应酌情给高分，但不得超过该题最高分值。如果考生的回答与参考答案不完全吻合，但上下一致，语气连贯，条理清晰，应按正确答案给分。
3. 写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档： 16——12分
上下较连贯，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档： 11 — 8分
上下基本连贯，语言表达不够清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档： 7 — 0分
上下不够连贯，语言不够通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误
_______________________________ Although age difference gives rise to communication problems between two generations，competition poses an even greater problem when people are about the same age．Intense competition in the modern world creates tremendous pressure on people．In order to get ahead in a career or in school, people tend to devote most of their time to working，studying，or other activities that enhance their prospects for the future．As a consequence，they have little inclination to communicate with others. They are anxious about their achievements because those are the measures of success in life. So, keen competition also discourages people from having a good understanding of each other.
Communicating with other people involves much effort because people's personality, the generation gap and keen competition bring about potential problems. These problems are constantly with us, and any of them may lead to a breakdown in communication between individuals.
II．Write an outline(20 points)
Read the following passage carefully and compose a ''topic outline'' for it．
What Is a Rodeo?
“Rodeo” is a Spanish word meaning ''gathering place or marketplace for cattle.” A rodeo itself is a competitive contest based loosely on traditional cowboy skills of riding and roping．It consists of six major events：riding an untamed horse in a saddle；riding an untamed horse without a saddle；riding a bull；roping a calf；wrestling a bull to the ground；racing horses around barrels with women riders. A rodeo is perhaps the most genuinely American of all sports．
The first rodeo took place following a cattle roundup in the 1880s．From this informal cowboy pastime，a colorful spectacle has evolved that contains many familiar American elements--the exciting action of bucking horses and bulls，the explosive masculine environment，the hot dog stands，beer barrels，boots，jeans，and cowboy hats．
Today, most rodeos are staged in a large，flat arena that is fenced off to protect the viewing public．Grandstands are erected on two sides of the arena；on the other sides are places to hold the horses，calves，and bulls．Nearby are narrow chutes from which animals are released into the arena．On a platform a loudspeaker system is set up for the announcer, who introduces the riders and comments on the events as they happen．Near the arena are refreshment stands where people gather to buy food and drink. Portable rest rooms are set up near the grandstand，and an ambulance is parked nearby in case of an accident.
An opening parade of proud riders on proud horses usually begins a rodeo；the performers carry flapping national and state flags．Then the two-act performance begins．Calf roping and bull wrestling are timed events．In the fastest possible time，a man must rope and throw to the ground a calf and tie three of its feet together．In bull wrestling，the object is to tumble the bull onto its back with its head and all its feet in line．Calf roping has been done under fifteen seconds，and a bull has been wrestled in less than ten seconds．
When riding an animal，a contestant mounts before the chute gates are opened．The rider must stay on the bucking animal for eight seconds；points are given for the performance of both the animal and the contestant．In all riding events，the contestant is disqualified if he touches the animal with his free hand．
Probably the most difficult rodeo feat is Brahman bull riding．During this event, a rodeo comes to resemble a circus because gaily-costumed clowns come into the arena to distract the bull's attention from fallen riders．To stay on a bucking bull for as long as eight seconds is one of the most challenging tasks in a rodeo. Spectators eagerly wait for this event．
The present circus extends far beyond the region where the contests first developed．Now rodeos are popular throughout the western half of the U．S．A．and in major eastern and southern cities．Australia also stages these events．One of the biggest rodeos of all is held during the annual Calgary Stampede in Calgary, Canada．
Topic outline
I ：Introduction ：rodeo, an American contest of cowboy skills
A: meaning of rodeo
B: Six major events based on cowboy skills
C: Thesis: A rodeo is perhaps the most genuinely American of all sports .
II: Development of the American colorful pastime.
A: The first rodeo in the 1880
B: American elements in the event
III: Present-day performance and rules
A: Arena and its environment
B: Opening parade
C: Time events: calf roping and bull wrestling
D: Riding events: animal riding and the most difficult feat.
IV: Conclusion: popularity in the U.S.A., Australia and Canada
评分参考】
1. 第二部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2．考生只能按题型要求写出“Topic Outline”,如用“Sentence Outline”或两种混用，则降档处理。如写成“Summary”或其它形式，则按零分处理。其中Thesis可置于Introduction之前。
3. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的答案在层次划分上与参考答案不一致，但条理清晰、概括完整，则按正确答案给分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
概括准确，内容完整，语言通顺，表达清楚。
第二档： 16——12分
概括较准确，个别要点有遗漏，语言较通顺，表达较清楚。
第三档： 11 — 8分
概括不够全面，部分要点有遗漏，语言基本通顺，表达基本清楚。
第四档： 7 — 0分
概括不够全面，遗漏大部分要点，语言不够通顺，表达不够清楚。
III．Compose an essay (60 points)
Traditionally, Chinese families would gather at home and have a big dinner on the eve of the Chinese New Year．In recent years, however, many families choose to have the dinner at restaurants．Which do you think is a better choice, and why? Write a 300-word expository essay stating your views.
参考答案略。
【评分参考】
１． 第三部分满分60分，按六个档次给分。其中３６分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
２．写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
３．作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
４．分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： ６0——５５分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。
第二档： ５４——４６分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：４５— ３６分
作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清晰、完整，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有些用词不当，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：３５ — １８分
作文基本切题，内容不够充实，结构不够清晰，语言不够通顺，表达不够连贯，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第五档：１７ — １0分
作文部分切题，内容不够充实，结构不清晰，语言不通顺，表达不连贯，有许多语法错误和拼写错误。
第六档：９ — 0分
作文不切题，内容较空洞，结构较混乱，语言不通顺，无法表达连贯意思
本试题答案下载：
课程代码：00603
I．Supply the missing paragraph(20 points)
The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing．Study the passage carefully and write the missing paragraph in about 100 words．Make sure that your tone and diction are in unity with the passage provided．
The Breakdown of Communication
It is commonly acknowledged that language problems make communication between people from different cultures difficult．Because of the language barriers，people cannot express their feelings clearly to each other．However, communication problems also exist between individuals from the same culture．Although they have the same cultural background，they sometimes cannot understand each other well．Communication between individuals breaks down because of many factors．The most significant ones include personality, age difference and competition between individuals．
Personality has a great influence on communication between people．First, the sharing of common interests is often essential for initiating communication． If two people hold completely different attitudes，it will not be easy for them to start communicating with each other．Second，the willingness to express their feelings and opinions freely is needed if meaningful communication is to be developed．Some people do not want to talk about controversial subjects, fearing that this will hurt their relationship with friends. Instead, they keep their discussion of topics at a very superficial level，which prevents them from knowing and understanding each other. The lack of understanding leads to unsuccessful communication. It is clear that personality, to some extent，affects the initiation and maintenance of communication.
{The age difference between generations also has a significant influence on communication. People of different generations receive very different education. Since society is advancing at a great pace, it is not surprising that they hold very divided opinions because of the wide gap in age. Disagreement on many topics between people of different generations results in difficulties for effective communication. For example, some parents expect their children to share their views, yet the values that the younger generation holds vary greatly from those accepted by the older generation. Therefore, communication between generations declines because of the lack of understanding. } （答案仅供参考）
【评分参考】
1. 第一部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的回答和参考答案意思相近，或思路新颖，且有创见，即使在整体上不够全面，也应酌情给高分，但不得超过该题最高分值。如果考生的回答与参考答案不完全吻合，但上下一致，语气连贯，条理清晰，应按正确答案给分。
3. 写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档： 16——12分
上下较连贯，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档： 11 — 8分
上下基本连贯，语言表达不够清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档： 7 — 0分
上下不够连贯，语言不够通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误
_______________________________ Although age difference gives rise to communication problems between two generations，competition poses an even greater problem when people are about the same age．Intense competition in the modern world creates tremendous pressure on people．In order to get ahead in a career or in school, people tend to devote most of their time to working，studying，or other activities that enhance their prospects for the future．As a consequence，they have little inclination to communicate with others. They are anxious about their achievements because those are the measures of success in life. So, keen competition also discourages people from having a good understanding of each other.
Communicating with other people involves much effort because people's personality, the generation gap and keen competition bring about potential problems. These problems are constantly with us, and any of them may lead to a breakdown in communication between individuals.
II．Write an outline(20 points)
Read the following passage carefully and compose a ''topic outline'' for it．
What Is a Rodeo?
“Rodeo” is a Spanish word meaning ''gathering place or marketplace for cattle.” A rodeo itself is a competitive contest based loosely on traditional cowboy skills of riding and roping．It consists of six major events：riding an untamed horse in a saddle；riding an untamed horse without a saddle；riding a bull；roping a calf；wrestling a bull to the ground；racing horses around barrels with women riders. A rodeo is perhaps the most genuinely American of all sports．
The first rodeo took place following a cattle roundup in the 1880s．From this informal cowboy pastime，a colorful spectacle has evolved that contains many familiar American elements--the exciting action of bucking horses and bulls，the explosive masculine environment，the hot dog stands，beer barrels，boots，jeans，and cowboy hats．
Today, most rodeos are staged in a large，flat arena that is fenced off to protect the viewing public．Grandstands are erected on two sides of the arena；on the other sides are places to hold the horses，calves，and bulls．Nearby are narrow chutes from which animals are released into the arena．On a platform a loudspeaker system is set up for the announcer, who introduces the riders and comments on the events as they happen．Near the arena are refreshment stands where people gather to buy food and drink. Portable rest rooms are set up near the grandstand，and an ambulance is parked nearby in case of an accident.
An opening parade of proud riders on proud horses usually begins a rodeo；the performers carry flapping national and state flags．Then the two-act performance begins．Calf roping and bull wrestling are timed events．In the fastest possible time，a man must rope and throw to the ground a calf and tie three of its feet together．In bull wrestling，the object is to tumble the bull onto its back with its head and all its feet in line．Calf roping has been done under fifteen seconds，and a bull has been wrestled in less than ten seconds．
When riding an animal，a contestant mounts before the chute gates are opened．The rider must stay on the bucking animal for eight seconds；points are given for the performance of both the animal and the contestant．In all riding events，the contestant is disqualified if he touches the animal with his free hand．
Probably the most difficult rodeo feat is Brahman bull riding．During this event, a rodeo comes to resemble a circus because gaily-costumed clowns come into the arena to distract the bull's attention from fallen riders．To stay on a bucking bull for as long as eight seconds is one of the most challenging tasks in a rodeo. Spectators eagerly wait for this event．
The present circus extends far beyond the region where the contests first developed．Now rodeos are popular throughout the western half of the U．S．A．and in major eastern and southern cities．Australia also stages these events．One of the biggest rodeos of all is held during the annual Calgary Stampede in Calgary, Canada．
Topic outline
I ：Introduction ：rodeo, an American contest of cowboy skills
A: meaning of rodeo
B: Six major events based on cowboy skills
C: Thesis: A rodeo is perhaps the most genuinely American of all sports .
II: Development of the American colorful pastime.
A: The first rodeo in the 1880
B: American elements in the event
III: Present-day performance and rules
A: Arena and its environment
B: Opening parade
C: Time events: calf roping and bull wrestling
D: Riding events: animal riding and the most difficult feat.
IV: Conclusion: popularity in the U.S.A., Australia and Canada
评分参考】
1. 第二部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2．考生只能按题型要求写出“Topic Outline”,如用“Sentence Outline”或两种混用，则降档处理。如写成“Summary”或其它形式，则按零分处理。其中Thesis可置于Introduction之前。
3. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的答案在层次划分上与参考答案不一致，但条理清晰、概括完整，则按正确答案给分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
概括准确，内容完整，语言通顺，表达清楚。
第二档： 16——12分
概括较准确，个别要点有遗漏，语言较通顺，表达较清楚。
第三档： 11 — 8分
概括不够全面，部分要点有遗漏，语言基本通顺，表达基本清楚。
第四档： 7 — 0分
概括不够全面，遗漏大部分要点，语言不够通顺，表达不够清楚。
III．Compose an essay (60 points)
Traditionally, Chinese families would gather at home and have a big dinner on the eve of the Chinese New Year．In recent years, however, many families choose to have the dinner at restaurants．Which do you think is a better choice, and why? Write a 300-word expository essay stating your views.
参考答案略。
【评分参考】
１． 第三部分满分60分，按六个档次给分。其中３６分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
２．写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
３．作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
４．分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： ６0——５５分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。
第二档： ５４——４６分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：４５— ３６分
作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清晰、完整，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有些用词不当，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：３５ — １８分
作文基本切题，内容不够充实，结构不够清晰，语言不够通顺，表达不够连贯，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第五档：１７ — １0分
作文部分切题，内容不够充实，结构不清晰，语言不通顺，表达不连贯，有许多语法错误和拼写错误。
第六档：９ — 0分
作文不切题，内容较空洞，结构较混乱，语言不通顺，无法表达连贯意思
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